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Look at the following excerpt:
"The Hookless Beginning:
In writing fiction, your opening should accomplish three things:
If you'll be working with a setting that lends itself to a vivid opener, start with a description of it. This will set the tone and mood of your work and give readers an immediate mental picture to get involved with:
She cannot see the flag outside, drooping in the dark, but she knows it is inscribed, "Central Vermont Medical Center." She knows every detail of the view from her window, every item in her room....
Let's look at what this opening accomplishes:
We are put inside the heart and mind of the woman in the hospital room ~ seeing what she sees and remembering with her what she cannot see in the dark. We are grounded, knowing we are in the Central Vermont Medical Center, and we are intimately aware of her fears. Of course she doesn't want to die. Now that we're there with her, we don't want her to die, and we want to know what this threat to her life is. So we read on, hooked by the somber setting.
This opening has accomplished the three main jobs of an opening:
This article is an excerpt from the audio book: THE WRITER'S TOOL BOX, Patrika Vaughn, $45, A Cappela Publishing.
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